Alrighty, so it's been a while since I finished writing my Major Work short story and I thought it was about time I shared it with this here small audience of my blog. Suprisingly, apart from a few painful sections of dialogue, I was actually pretty happy with it. But don't let that stop you from being brutally honest with me; constructive criticism is still appreciated, as I would like to continue writing and making little projects here and there. Well enough pre-game babble, let's get into it-
Opposable Thumbs by Joseph Bautista
Pretty much the same version as I submitted to BOS, typos and all. The only things I added were my name and a bit of a self-satirising intro to go with the coversheet. Hope y'all enjoy it more than my markers have, and if you do read it please tell me what you think in the comments!
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